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Old 25th August 2010, 00:09   #1
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Some saturday.

Sometimes I feel like staying in bed for just, some more time..
just a couple of moments more.

This saturday I will not wake up so early like every day,
I will not hurry...

I would sleep, relaxed, with a gentle hug, and frequent cajoling, sudden party packs of kisses showering on me.

My closed eyes moving, like I am watching a dream, or trying to see something.

She wouldn't know how long she has been watching me, but she is, for sure watching this devil sleep.

She for once will wonder, (well this is the only time that this devil's angel is quiet and at peace!), look how peaceful he looks, sleeping so cozy and so soft. He looks so beautiful, I wonder if i would wake him up, if I kissed him on his cheek, or forehead, or his smooth hair.

She will think,

I should tuck his hair behind his ears, so I can see him clear enough...

How long is it before he wakes up?
I adore him so much,
He is so nice to me, takes care of me, sings to me, plays the guitar for me,

the way he lets me never feel down,

the way he says all his words, chosen so well, (all the time !!!); (OMG)

the way his breath feels, when it rests on me.

the way he smells my hair, and tells me how fabulous it smells

(and the way, I call him "Liar" just after he says something like that!)

the way he sees in my eyes, and sees everything that they hold.

the way he knows how to touch me, and when to...

the way he carries me, in his arms...

the way he lets me be a child,

the way, he just cant be angry with me... (wow, I sooo like that)...

the way he calls me, with different names, that sweep me off my feet...

the way he feels me.



Aaww,

look at him sleep,
He surprises me, by the kind of patience he has with me,
never he complains,..


Hey you ... why dont you complain?

Complain, that I dont give you enough time,
that I dont laugh so much on your super (stupid) good jokes !!

that I bug you so much; too much !! (hey, you like me bugging you, right?.. ya you do, i know!)

I would like you to complain, sometime... that would be cute !

I would take all the care, to make it up .. (like you would want me to.. hehe, I know, when I say that, you will have "that look " in your eyes !! i know, for sure.. the naughty_look_meets_innocent_boy's_look .. that one..! I love it so much!)

let me tuck your hair, the way i like it..

hmm..
your hair feels so soft!
Its so hard, to stop feeling your hair..

it feels really nice, to run my fingers through your hair...

your hair, when they touch my face... anytime, everytime they give me multiple goosebumps.. ( like some standing ovation or something... )

(I would have told you that, but then, you would start flying in the air !!

Look at you, in your white night shirt, with those mischievous lips, and your fair nose, and ..

Can I just plant my affection on your forehead?

Or would I wake you up, ahem?

Should I cuddle up.. should I push myself in your arms, or should
i pull you in mine..
Should I call your name slowly, in your ears.. whisper, perhaps..


I dont want you to go to the office today ... (I will say that with a childish, stubborn_kid tone)

will you not go to the office then? hmmm?

oops! I said that "hmm?" out loud...

you are moving..


Your eyes are just opening or trying to open.. or just barely making an effort to catch a glimpse of what time is it ...

You see me, looking at you..

(Me on one side, with my hand supporting my head, and other, busy with your hair! )

Smile carves your face ..
that makes me beat faster! (even after all this time, nothing has changed! I hope it never does..)

You look at me..
with the same very look I was thinking about, sometime ago..."



I would be as lazy as I have been,
But I see you looking at me like that..
I lose my sleep in matter of no time!


I wake up, to see you look at me, that way.. like you are thinking about me.. for how long, I dont know...

Its Saturday morning,

either ways, I wasn't planning to go anywhere today...

why don't I stay.. and make this day really special...

Just like that..
No occasion!

Lets say, just because I have got this most beautiful girl by my side..
and I want to tell her that...
(Never would that be done in one day !!)

but, I can make this day extra nice..
I will make you feel beautiful,

I will take you in my arms and carry you.. like you want me to..

Lets name this our day!

Come here, and make me feel "us"

~~ You say it best when you say Nothing at all ..- plays in the backdrop..

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Old 25th August 2010, 23:13   #2
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Amazing story. Could i borrow this from you? Feel like sending this to some one close
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well i guess there are no replies because everyone's in deep thought.they're all thinking about the one in their lives.Even i'm replying after a good long thought session and i'm stealing this!

Very well written.Hope to see more of these so that i can steal them even more.Just for my someone special only.
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Old 26th August 2010, 11:57   #4
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Amazing story. Could i borrow this from you? Feel like sending this to some one close
Dear Maddy,

Sure!
If it makes some moments in your life sweeter, that would make me happy too!


take care..

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well i guess there are no replies because everyone's in deep thought.they're all thinking about the one in their lives.Even i'm replying after a good long thought session and i'm stealing this!

Very well written.Hope to see more of these so that i can steal them even more.Just for my someone special only.
Dear navpreet,
that was skyhigh flattery!
Now, I am confused, do I write more! or not!?

thank you for the feedback.
and, sure..
Share the moments!

more stories to come!

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Old 26th August 2010, 12:17   #5
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Ace,

Thanks for making me float in a nice dream, expecting more 'real life' narrations from you.
@Navpreet - You are absolutely right, Ace made many people dream.
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That was splendid!! You write well. Yeti, watch out!! You got competition.
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Ace,

Thanks for making me float in a nice dream, expecting more 'real life' narrations from you.
@Navpreet - You are absolutely right, Ace made many people dream.
Thank you too Kite Runner,
'real life' narrations !
Ok. I will only say..
Not just yet, but soon!
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That was splendid!! You write well. Yeti, watch out!! You got competition.
Thanks Sachin.
//I am a Yeti fan myself! (his narrations are superb!)

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Heck, this shouldn't be in the "Shifting gears" section. This needs a new section all on its own, called "Automatic transmission"...
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Awwww, That was beautiful Ace. I just love the way you have incepted yourself in your 'Love's' mind and read it as if it's your subconscious thinking. Deep Dude.
You must really be in love.
And i bet on one more thing... You are not married
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Awwww, That was beautiful Ace. I just love the way you have incepted yourself in your 'Love's' mind and read it as if it's your subconscious thinking. Deep Dude.
yup , I completely agree too. i kinda had a image of all the happenings as I was reading the post. Awesome feelings expressed beautifully.

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You must really be in love.
It sure looks like that.And that he really cherishes the moment spent with his love one. All those small one counts.

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And i bet on one more thing... You are not married
haha!! Is this real Ace? We would like to know !!
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SS-traveller, isldhn, Fordmanchau,

Thank you for the appreciation.

Glad you all like it.


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And i bet on one more thing... You are not married
I wouldnt bet!

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haha!! Is this real Ace? We would like to know !!
Umm..

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Hello all,

Do you remember, when Chandler proposed Monica!?
(I mean after she tried to propose him first, and choked on her own!)
He got down on his knees, he had that ring with him, and he said all those mushy things to her!
".. If you let me, I want to spend my whole life making you feel, the way you have made me feel.."

I thought, like, WOW ! , But, do they do that in real life!?

I mean, I have heard people back out at the last moment, I have heard love growing mutually and all, but such an elaborate_single_breath_explanation of how you feel to your special one..
That's something else.

Isn't it?


I remember it was a bit different..

story coming up..

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When I think about you,
I sometimes wonder, what you might be thinking about,
at that exact moment.
You know, sometimes at the very moment you feel something really deep within, it moves you.
I don't believe that thoughts can be totally abstract.
They cannot simply be within you!
They come out, surface, as feelings they grow, and change the way you behave. That in turn changes the way you appear to people around you.
Sometimes we are open enough to let know, sometimes we are not.
Sometimes its something very intimate, sometimes its in shades of gray, sometimes it is just what is obvious.

I never learned how to bridge the gap of feelings on the inside, to what & how I am on the outside. I guess, it is for each of us to decide for ourselves.

I do not want to be cosmetic with you.
You are the most beautiful girl, and on my mind, like all the time!!
But, I choose not to tell you that too often..

"I do not lie" (--when I say that in person, I try to be as serious as possible)
But, when I say this- “You mean a lot to me..” I do not need to pretend!
Sometimes you don't realize, but, all I want is to be very near to you.
Very close, close enough to feel your heart beat in rhythm,
close enough to gaze in your eyes and put everything behind.
You know, I have always wanted to tell you,
your eyes are some super nova-nebula star studded galaxies put together even more beautifully!
They sparkle so beautifully, (like even when you try to make out whether my haircut is balanced from both the sides.)
They don't have just one single color all the time.
They are just so gorgeous when I look into them the first thing in the morning.
When they are tender & soothing than ever, they inspire me to paint the most vibrant colors on the canvas, play some beautiful melody on the keyboard,
and dedicate them both to just a fraction of the way your eyes make me feel!
When we are together in our car, on a long evening drive, at some sunset-point, I see them,
and cannot help but think,
what wonderful name you girls might have for this color, really..
(given that I normally describe “pink” as “brightish~whitish red” or simply “shade of red”
I will have to take up some course like PGDC in colors and advanced colors!
Back in school, when we learned about colors I really did not think it was that important to allocate more than 8-9 spots of memory for the header“colors”..)

Really, that is the reason why I do not even begin to tell you how much I am in love with your eyes.
On doing which, I would definitely (at some point of time) will have to describe their color to you.
And then,
If I happen to say (God forbid) they look like blackish-greened-brown ..with fumbling brush of yellow,
then, that would not be an accurate description of your eye color,
but next day my eye color would without doubt be an accurate “black”.

But, nothing even comes close to what I feel and see when I look into your eyes in the moonlight.
They are so beautiful, and they shine on like crazy diamonds!
That's when I really believe I can't stop falling in love with you all over again.


When, I travel alone, I try to imagine, how it must be to lead a life of a traveler with no baggage.
Like as in the movie “Up in the air”.
I am a simple man.
I travel in the red/rusted squeaking bus, a shared auto-rick, really overcrowded traveler vans, with as much same feeling as when I travel air-borne, or A/c trains, or a conditioned air cab-with the driver saying “How are you today sir?, Where to sir?”.
I understand the difference,
but it diminishes to negligible value, as soon as I begin to think.
The hurry, the rush, the speed, the hush-bush,
the complacency, the disregard, the carelessness, the restlessness are all part of journey. These are pretty much in succession all the time.

Everybody is so eager to reach the destination, journey is hardly worth consideration to many!
We travel, and arrive. We arrive to travel more!

If we do not live in the journey as well, We are really living a negligible fraction of our lives, at the arrivals only!


With you, every moment I spend, is admiration of us being together through the journey. It's the journey.
Your eyes remind me of when we met, & how we are together since.
Girls are supposed to talk like they are paid by the word! But, you really don't talk much. Your eyes, my dear, they really let me feel you, and warmth of your heart,
and all that you think about me, leaving nothing for words of any language to say to me.
Your beautiful eyes remind me of that our journey is together!
That's just one more reason, why I love your beautiful eyes.

And, that's just one more reason, I love you..

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I could not help myslef from not posting here.

What unique use of words

Keep it going Buddy, you take us to a different world through your posts.

Yours would be the only posts where people would not ask for "Pics Please"
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thank you, Pavan Kadam!

trivia- this coffee time story was written at coffee time with Costa coffee, Bangalore (sweet november)
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