Any poets on Team-BHP? Post all your poems here!

Sam Kapasi · 3rd March 2009, 18:02

Quote:

Originally Posted by mclaren1885

Thanks for bringing this error to my notice Sam. Could you just report it to the mods please and have it changed please?

Even though I may be a good sport,
Why oh why shall I report?
I admit that I may have some good rapport,
But I suggest that you directly contact support.

iceman91 · 3rd March 2009, 18:09

lol...that was a quick poem or was it a limerick??

leadf00t · 3rd March 2009, 18:55

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sam Kapasi

Even though I may be a good sport,
Why oh why shall I report?
I admit that I may have some good rapport,
But I suggest that you directly contact support.

sam nice one.

however one question, its fine to write it that way but what about pronunciation.

Rapport - > support they don't rhyme

sorry excuse me your Yeti Highness for raising doubts about your Inglisss..

Sam Kapasi · 3rd March 2009, 19:26

Quote:

Originally Posted by leadf00t

Rapport - > support they don't rhyme

sorry excuse me your Yeti Highness for raising doubts about your Inglisss..

Us poet's have a special licen's.

humyum · 17th April 2009, 17:39

Smooth Easy Ride,
We’r jus gonna glide,
Shifting Gears, Surge and Tide,
Velocity, Acceleration, Our side!

Power, torque, ground,
Ola speed of sound!
Blur Vision,Love found,
Turbo Whistle, Smoke surround!

Pistons surging up, down!
Cams, cranks turning around,
Engine, A perfect friend!
For it goes on till the end!

Brakes Fading, Metallica raiding,
Fear Staring, Tyres Tearing!
Nirvana, Heaven defined to the T,
Turbo Lover, Yeah me !

ashish22 · 17th April 2009, 20:39

here's my fav..
"yeh jo ladkiyon ke baal hote hain,
"yeh ladkon ko fasaane ki chaal hote hain"
"khoon choos leti hain phir unka"
"isiliye toh unke hoth laal hote hain"

please excuse me for this post

hkanitkar · 14th May 2009, 22:22

Yes.
I am doing it all over again...

the kind of options.. what am i to choose ?
risking some chances, with nothing to lose..

'fraid of it, though goin that way..
lessons of the past make my thoughts sway...

is it in my control ?
Why not ? It seems so..
Am I to control it - i say hell, NO !

Nothin to lose and so much to gain..
my heart questions me.. is it worth the pain ??

Yet, I am gonna do it again..
All over again..

- Hrishikesh.

redeff · 14th May 2009, 22:46

Sunday, April 12, 2009

Touched by an Angel

They say that Angels sit in heaven,
and lend the stars their light,
but here on earth, there is a girl,
who looked like an Angel that night!

The sun had gone down in the west,
the moon was not yet its brilliant white,
and through the darkness you walked to me,
Like an Angel that night!

The silver light around you swirled,
and lit up your brilliant smile,
the moonbeams they enrobed you,
Like an Angel, that night!

As you came close, the world stood still,
my heart didn't feel quite fine,
and in the darkness your voice echoed,
Like an Angel that night!

You sat down right next to me,
I lost all track of time,
and even the moon came down to see you look,
Like an Angel that night!

I never saw this part of you,
we usually just tend to fight,
but for the first time you struck a chord,
Like an angel that night!

But all good things do come to an end,
you stayed but just a while,
and through the darkness you melted away,
like an angel that night...

You touched my heart as you walked away,
I still miss that shining light,
All I want is one chance with you,
Oh Angel in the night!

It's been taken from my blog. My blog can be found @ - redeff.blogspot.com

hkanitkar · 14th May 2009, 23:08

@redeff - buddy this one's amazing ! in love kya ?

pjbiju · 14th May 2009, 23:20

@redeff. Wonderful poem buddy! Enjoyed reading it.

redeff · 15th May 2009, 10:04

I was. Well i got quite a few poems on my blog, i'v given the link, if not ill post them here one by one as time permits

Rocky_Balboa · 8th October 2009, 14:51

Pardon me for the native language, something I wrote (for) a friend.

Uyirellam vendha pothum.,
Unarvukku Karam thandhu,
Uyirukku Oottam thandhu,
Uruga Thool thandhu,
Uravukku Natpu thandhu,
Ennai uruvaakiya Unnai,
Uyir/Udal vendha pinnum Unarnthu konde iruppen.

Rocky_Balboa · 9th October 2009, 14:31

This again in native language, something I penned yesterday.

Ninaivalaikkul nindrukondu
ninaikka matten engiraye..
Unarvellam sethukkivittu
Uravillai engiraye..
Uyirukkul ooduruvi
Uyir vendam engiraye..
kallarai mattum sugam kaanuma?
kaadhali unnaip pirinthal.

ariyaamal thaan thigaithen
muyalaamal thaan irundhen
sollamal thaan nindren
seiyamal thaan poonen
aanal,
Unnai (enni)
Urugaamal illai,
Unaraamal illai.

motorpsycho · 4th November 2009, 17:07

I do not know what to believe

What I believed turned out to be an illusion

I search for answers
To non existent questions

I no longer know what it means to have faith

Feel like a ship without a rudder nor a shore

I regret what I choose to love

I choose an illusion

dre@ms · 4th November 2009, 17:18

I have one in my native language, wrote when I was in 11th.

Nee en vazhkaiyil mazhai tharavaendiyaval;
kangalil thandhu vidathey!!!

3rd March 2009, 18:09	#77
iceman91 Senior - BHPian Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: melbourne/banga Posts: 1,961 Thanked: 34 Times View My Garage	lol...that was a quick poem or was it a limerick??
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17th April 2009, 17:39	#80
humyum Senior - BHPian Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Mumbai Posts: 2,752 Thanked: 5,431 Times	Turbo Lover! Smooth Easy Ride, We’r jus gonna glide, Shifting Gears, Surge and Tide, Velocity, Acceleration, Our side! Power, torque, ground, Ola speed of sound! Blur Vision,Love found, Turbo Whistle, Smoke surround! Pistons surging up, down! Cams, cranks turning around, Engine, A perfect friend! For it goes on till the end! Brakes Fading, Metallica raiding, Fear Staring, Tyres Tearing! Nirvana, Heaven defined to the T, Turbo Lover, Yeah me !
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17th April 2009, 20:39	#81
ashish22 BHPian Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Gurgaon Posts: 598 Thanked: 100 Times View My Garage	here's my fav.. "yeh jo ladkiyon ke baal hote hain, "yeh ladkon ko fasaane ki chaal hote hain" "khoon choos leti hain phir unka" "isiliye toh unke hoth laal hote hain" please excuse me for this post
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14th May 2009, 22:22	#82
hkanitkar BHPian Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: pune Posts: 668 Thanked: 109 Times View My Garage	All over again.. Yes. I am doing it all over again... the kind of options.. what am i to choose ? risking some chances, with nothing to lose.. 'fraid of it, though goin that way.. lessons of the past make my thoughts sway... is it in my control ? Why not ? It seems so.. Am I to control it - i say hell, NO ! Nothin to lose and so much to gain.. my heart questions me.. is it worth the pain ?? Yet, I am gonna do it again.. All over again.. - Hrishikesh.
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14th May 2009, 22:46	#83
redeff BHPian Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Mumbai Posts: 356 Thanked: 272 Times View My Garage	Sunday, April 12, 2009 Touched by an Angel They say that Angels sit in heaven, and lend the stars their light, but here on earth, there is a girl, who looked like an Angel that night! The sun had gone down in the west, the moon was not yet its brilliant white, and through the darkness you walked to me, Like an Angel that night! The silver light around you swirled, and lit up your brilliant smile, the moonbeams they enrobed you, Like an Angel, that night! As you came close, the world stood still, my heart didn't feel quite fine, and in the darkness your voice echoed, Like an Angel that night! You sat down right next to me, I lost all track of time, and even the moon came down to see you look, Like an Angel that night! I never saw this part of you, we usually just tend to fight, but for the first time you struck a chord, Like an angel that night! But all good things do come to an end, you stayed but just a while, and through the darkness you melted away, like an angel that night... You touched my heart as you walked away, I still miss that shining light, All I want is one chance with you, Oh Angel in the night! It's been taken from my blog. My blog can be found @ - redeff.blogspot.com
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14th May 2009, 23:08	#84
hkanitkar BHPian Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: pune Posts: 668 Thanked: 109 Times View My Garage	@redeff - buddy this one's amazing ! in love kya ?
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14th May 2009, 23:20	#85
pjbiju Senior - BHPian Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Pune Posts: 1,358 Thanked: 1,092 Times	@redeff. Wonderful poem buddy! Enjoyed reading it.
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15th May 2009, 10:04	#86
redeff BHPian Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Mumbai Posts: 356 Thanked: 272 Times View My Garage	I was. Well i got quite a few poems on my blog, i'v given the link, if not ill post them here one by one as time permits
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8th October 2009, 14:51	#87
Rocky_Balboa BHPian Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Namma Bengalooru Posts: 676 Thanked: 358 Times View My Garage	Pardon me for the native language, something I wrote (for) a friend. Uyirellam vendha pothum., Unarvukku Karam thandhu, Uyirukku Oottam thandhu, Uruga Thool thandhu, Uravukku Natpu thandhu, Ennai uruvaakiya Unnai, Uyir/Udal vendha pinnum Unarnthu konde iruppen. Last edited by Rocky_Balboa : 8th October 2009 at 14:53.
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9th October 2009, 14:31	#88
Rocky_Balboa BHPian Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Namma Bengalooru Posts: 676 Thanked: 358 Times View My Garage	This again in native language, something I penned yesterday. Ninaivalaikkul nindrukondu ninaikka matten engiraye.. Unarvellam sethukkivittu Uravillai engiraye.. Uyirukkul ooduruvi Uyir vendam engiraye.. kallarai mattum sugam kaanuma? kaadhali unnaip pirinthal. ariyaamal thaan thigaithen muyalaamal thaan irundhen sollamal thaan nindren seiyamal thaan poonen aanal, Unnai (enni) Urugaamal illai, Unaraamal illai. Last edited by Rocky_Balboa : 9th October 2009 at 14:32.
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4th November 2009, 17:07	#89
motorpsycho BHPian Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Hubli Posts: 482 Thanked: 448 Times	I do not know what to believe What I believed turned out to be an illusion I search for answers To non existent questions I no longer know what it means to have faith Feel like a ship without a rudder nor a shore I regret what I choose to love I choose an illusion
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4th November 2009, 17:18	#90
dre@ms BHPian Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: MADRAS Posts: 638 Thanked: 206 Times	I have one in my native language, wrote when I was in 11th. Nee en vazhkaiyil mazhai tharavaendiyaval; kangalil thandhu vidathey!!!
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